The climax of my story is the morning when the Shoemaker and his wife discover dozens of shoes that have been unexplainably made. The three men enter the store and purchase a pair of shoes. After they have fallen in love with the shoes, they will brag to the towns people about the shoes and shoes will began to sell like crazy.
The store will become well known and every one will purchase shoes from the Shoemakers shop and the shoes will continue to be made by the dozens. Then one night the Shoemaker and his wife will stay up and spy on the shop to see what is making such great shoes, bringing them all of there fortunes.
When the clock strikes 12 midnight they will see the fairy-dragons enter the shop and get right to work, making dozens of shoes by the hour. Then they will watch in disbelief as the fairy-dragons leave. When they leave the shoemakers will make them clothes so that the dragons can work comfortably. The story will soon began to unfold as the climax is revealed.
I think you explained the climax in a lot of detail. Explaining it from start to finish makes your story better.
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