Thursday, January 28, 2010

Day fourteen

Today I am taking time out to put my story in chronological order or think about the order of events my story will be in. I know the dragons will enter the shoemakers shop every night at 12 midnight. My story will only go over a course of a week. It will not be told day by day but it will have a lot of detail.

The story will start off on one sunny Monday morning. The shoemaker will be at his shop with his wife, like every other day, and he will finally realize that he is not making enough money no matter how hard he works and make shoes. Then he will get into a brief discussion with his wife about there misfortunes and bad luck. Then his wife and him will make a wish that they could become wealthy and make great shoes that will sell a lot more.

That night when the Shoemakers grandfather clock strikes 12 a magical smoke will appear in the air and a Buddha figure will hit an instrument when three little dragons jump through the far left window in the back of the shoe store. The dragons will grab a few supplies and get to work on making shoes. When the Shoemaker and his wife wake up in the morning and open up the store, three customers that are tourist will enter the store looking for a pair of shoes.

When the three customer spot out 12 pair of nice shoes that are on a counter, they will ask how much for the shoes. The Shoemaker will be stuck because he will not know where the shoes appeared from. He says a price and the tourist purchase the shoes and leave the store. Then the Shoemaker will ask his wife where the shoes came from. They will both look confused and stuck. Then for about 3 days the shoes will keep appearing as the shoe store attracts more customers.

One night the couple hears a sound in the middle of the night and hear little people talking, thew will see the dragons hard at work and look amazed. Then they will watch all night until the dragons leave. They look astonished and full of joy. Then the story will start to unfold.

1 comment:

  1. It looks like you are getting off to a good start with your story, keep up the good work.

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